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Post by sylvia on Jul 30, 2011 23:41:58 GMT 8
The poems i have posted so far are from a while back, i got out of the habit of writing but trying to get back into it big time now, ended up writing these two poems at 1am, still feel a bit rough round the edges but its a start:
SLIVER
Fastidious moonbeam.... why so brightly critical? of every crater every tiny mottled moth aflutter in tour last soulless glow Insignificant nothings thirsty for the light warmth.... the last touches tenderness before the darkness consumes all
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EXECUTION
Traitors one and traitors all lies lies fall and drip from filthy poisonous tongues
String them up, hack their limbs let the crowds line up see them drown within their own lungs
No mercy, No kindness for traitors all are men
To the fires they go Live forever in satan's den
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Post by Gg on Jul 31, 2011 8:09:06 GMT 8
I am hoping to never make you mad!! I'd be eviscerated in poetry!!!
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Post by lynette on Jul 31, 2011 19:20:39 GMT 8
Quite depressing poems. I'm just an occasional poet, I wrote three poems in March, but I have no inspiration since then.
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Post by sylvia on Aug 1, 2011 0:02:03 GMT 8
I suppose a lot of me poems are quite dark, that just seems to be where my inspiration comes. I dont find "happy" poems have quite the same impact
GG - I like to think of myself as an evil genius ; )
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Post by Gg on Aug 1, 2011 1:39:52 GMT 8
I like it! evil genius!
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Post by lynette on Aug 1, 2011 2:51:11 GMT 8
I suppose a lot of me poems are quite dark, that just seems to be where my inspiration comes. I dont find "happy" poems have quite the same impact GG - I like to think of myself as an evil genius ; ) It was not a criticism, I love reading your poems. I like poems with a darker theme / topic of death and afterlife, suicide, murder, etc. / and I collect these poems a few years. My poems are pessimistic, sad and dark as well, I don't have optimism and cheerfulness in nature. I wrote my first poem in a very cheerful and witty spirit, but it was only once, really ..
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Post by cat on Aug 4, 2011 5:19:52 GMT 8
Sylvia, I think you should create an e-book with your poems! They are really good.
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Post by sylvia on Aug 5, 2011 2:42:53 GMT 8
I am useless with technology unfortunately haha
*stuck in the 19th century*
Thank you
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